more WIP

[missbonbon]

Edits made:

-Less spine shading on males and females back. I feel like it doesn't look like a trench anymore!
-Freckles made darker on female skin so they wouldn't disappear as the tone got darker.
-Reduced redness on darker skins.
-Male face had a weird "halo" around the mouth. Reduced it, may look into editing it some more.
-Less ab shading on males body.

As always, models have no makeup and no editing to pictures aside of bordering/resizing.

Comments

[moryrie]

I like how you redid the abs. I'm still seeing a bit of grey-oddness on one of the dude's collarbones, but its not as bad now.

[missbonbon]

Thank you!

Do you think it would be to unrealistic if I just told people he got roundhouse kicked in the neck? I kid I kid!

[robokitty]

The guy's mouth looks a lot better now. The male's shoulder blades are still a little weird to me. I'd personally make them more subtle by reducing the severity of the highlight & shadow.

The dark skintone looks freaky on the male, but since it looks good on the female, I'm going to assume it's just because of his structure/coloration does not compute for a black guy.

[missbonbon]

Thank you! I'll have to try that. They look a bit off to me but I can't figure out exactly what it is. I guess maybe I should google some guy's backs to see some examples.